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©2007-2009 ~TheCopperDragon
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Body Breakdown

Silent screams and shattered dreams of what we left at seventeen
Still lost within the misery and pain that lies inside
Here alone the fight to breathe still searching for the truth to be
Blackened by the burning fire held deep inside my mind!

Far beyond the lost horizon standing on the shore
Across the seas their hearts will bleed
This life we're waiting for

Taste the steel, in pain you kneel
For glory we defend
Our fallen souls will rise to fight again!

Stay here with me, this night we'll be together
Future in our hands we'll fight with freedom drawing near
Stand here with me for we will live forever
Tonight we stand and face it all

Falling rain will hide the pain that lies beneath the burning flames
All hope is gone so carry on before the world will fall
Rise again to die in vain now life can never be the same
Our own salvation drawing nearer, hear the darkness call

Skies are falling, thunder storming stand before the world
We're banished now to barren wastelands, fight the demon whore
Riding on through blackened darkness, cross the endless sands
We sail away, our victory at hand!

Stay here with me
Together we'll be stronger
Side by side we've conquered lands
And stormed across the seas

Die here with me
We feel this pain no longer
For now and ever we will be

[Chorus:]
In my heart, in my soul, I am out of control
Fly across the mountains and towards the distant sun
Tears evermore we cry like before
Feel the breakdown of my body - set me free



//Kinda the way Ive felt in March/April but Im happy to say I feel alot better now.
I would be interested to hear other peoples input on this piece, color use, composition, stuff like that. But please post constructive crit.
//

//btw Lyrics by the most awsome band today Dragonfoce, rockon//

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:iconjessnumbuh20:
Im happy you're feeling better. Now Im really glad I couldnt make it. Im sure my being there would have done more harm than good.

This is really pretty.

This comment isnt too contructive but I dont think you need to hear anything negative from my mouth.
:iconthecopperdragon:
Thankyou and im sure we can work something out if we are both reasonable, rational beings.

--
Dont mess with a Dragon, for you can become crunchy and therefor taste good with your choice of condiment.

~My own adaptation of a classic draconic line.
:iconspitfiredragon:
I like it better as the thumbnail size, the colors work very well.. the piece has a tinge of action to it, and emotion, zooming in doesn't add anything more though. I think cutting the original size by half and it will be a good size to keep.

Things worked out well for the piece, but what about you? o.o Anything last night we did to upset you, or did you already have this piece done then? ^^;
:iconjessnumbuh20:
I just think you're happier without me. All I do is bring you down or make you feel bad.
:iconthecopperdragon:
no actually you helped me to finished this piece, read my journal you will inderstand : )

--
Dont mess with a Dragon, for you can become crunchy and therefor taste good with your choice of condiment.

~My own adaptation of a classic draconic line.

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